Note that the topics in the forum should be such that they elicit discussions from the members. You should avoid posting generalized text which merely provides some vague information on something. See the other threads of members to understand how you can post on an interesting topic which will make members exchange views and react to other's opinions in that thread.
I would also suggest that you avoid one single extra lengthy sentence. Sentence format is important for a better understanding to the reader. An over lengthy sentence, such as the one given by you, which goes on and on and on, make the reader lose track of what is being put across. The basic principle is: Read the sentence aloud after you have written it. If you lose your breadth mid-way, it means it is far too long!